Read scripts, learn screenwriting! (Your December Script Club invite)Script Club is back for December — and we’re going festive. This month we’re reading Jingle Bell Heist by Abby McDonald. It’s a holiday heist romcom with a ton of useful lessons packed into a really fun read. If you’re interested in writing a two-hander, romcom, holiday movie, or heist movie (or you just like a smart, charming script), this one’s for you. You’ll find all the details and the download link for the screenplay below. Welcome (back) to Script Club — the reading club for screenwriters.WHO: Screenwriters and people who like to read and discuss screenplays. WHAT: ’Tis the season, so I thought Jingle Bell Heist would be a fun read! Plus, it has some great lessons for anyone who wants to write a two-hander, a romcom, a holiday movie, or a heist movie. And even if none of those is true for you, there’s some great writing in these pages — I noticed examples of voice-y scene description, clever transitions, and sharp character intros I can’t wait to discuss with you. WHEN: Sunday, December 14, 2025 @ 9am Pacific / 12pm Eastern. WHERE: We'll meet on Zoom. I’ll send the meeting link out in next Friday’s Weekly Memo email, so keep an eye out for it. WHY: To read good scripts, talk about what makes them work, and identify some takeaways you can apply to your own writing. HOW:
No need to RSVP — just read the script and watch for the Zoom meeting link in next week's email if you’d like to join. (It's a free event!) 😊 Until next time, Naomi P.S. It's the last Script Club of the year! I don’t know how we got from New Year’s resolutions to “festive criminal activity” season so fast, but here we are. |
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