How to make plot and character work togetherOne of the fastest ways to lose your audience is to let your plot and character drift on separate tracks. You see this most often in early drafts of screenplays, but sometimes it even slips into finished films. A protagonist is introduced with clear qualities and flaws, but then the events of the story don’t really challenge those traits. By the end, the character may have “changed,” but the transformation feels arbitrary or unearned. And when that happens, the story rarely delivers the emotional impact the writer intended. The opposite is also true. When plot and character are designed to interact, to push and pull on each other, the story feels purposeful, cohesive, and emotionally satisfying. That’s the effect we’re aiming for. So how do we get there? Why plot and character need each otherAt its core, story is the interaction between a character and the circumstances they face. The two are in constant dialogue, shaping one another moment by moment. On one side, the plot acts on the character. The story events put pressure on the protagonist, throwing obstacles in their way and forcing them to confront challenges they might otherwise avoid. This is how the story exposes who they really are — their strengths, weaknesses, blind spots, and potential. On the other side, the character acts on the plot. Every choice the protagonist makes in response to those events pushes the story in a particular direction. Each decision — whether to run, fight, confess, lie, or anything else — shapes the trajectory of what happens next. The audience isn’t just watching a series of events; they’re experiencing how those events affect the protagonist and result in meaningful consequences. The character flaw as the bridge to themeWhen we talk about character flaw, we really mean a specific, prominent behavior or characteristic that's usually an outgrowth of the protagonist’s faulty belief about the world. That faulty belief is what the story is designed to challenge, and the change in it points to the theme. For example, imagine a character whose flaw is being overly cautious. On the surface, that might just look like refusing to take risks. But if we dig deeper, we see the flaw is rooted in a belief like: “The world is dangerous, and the only way to stay safe is to never put myself out there.” Over the course of the story, events would challenge this belief. And in a movie with a typical character arc, the protagonist's faulty belief is transformed by the end. The protagonist embraces a new understanding and that's demonstrated in behavior that goes along with it. In our example, that might mean embracing a new perspective, like "A life lived in fear isn't a life at all," and no longer being overly cautious, learning to take some risks. So now we’ve watched not only a character arc but also the expression of a thematic lesson. The character flaw creates a bridge for the audience between the character and the theme. The flaw is evidence of what’s happening inside the character. When that flawed behavior changes, it shows us that an internal shift has occurred. This transformation tells us what the story means. The power of interconnectionStrong, meaningful stories feel like all the pieces belong together. The plot isn’t just a string of random events meant to provide spectacle. It’s carefully designed to test the protagonist in a very specific way. And the protagonist isn’t just a generic figure dropped into the situation. They need this experience in some way. When that connection is clear, several things happen. First, conflict feels organic. Instead of throwing in trouble just to stir the pot, the external events press directly against the character’s internal traits or flaws. We recognize the logic of the struggle because it grows out of who the protagonist is. Second, change feels earned. Because we’ve seen the protagonist wrestle with their flaw under mounting pressure and gradually inch toward growth, their eventual transformation resonates. We’ve witnessed the hard-fought process that got them there. Finally, the whole story feels cohesive. Instead of a collection of unrelated ideas, it plays like a unified experience in which every element belongs to the same whole. When a story sets up a character with certain defining traits but then sends them through a plot that doesn’t test those traits, the story can feel scattered, as though it’s juggling too many unrelated ideas at once. It can also feel unclear, because we don’t understand why these events lead to that change. And ultimately, without a logical connection between events and transformation, the story rings false and the audience isn't likely to feel moved. Designing plot and character togetherThe solution is to design plot and character as a matched set, deliberately creating a relationship between them. (From the very beginning, if possible, but plenty of writers discover the relationship over time and drafts, and then work it in.) If you’re starting with plot, ask:
If you’re starting with character:
By tailoring the external challenge to the internal need, you create a plot that feels designed for this specific person. Choose the right man (or woman) for the jobThe stories that stick with us are the ones where plot and character are inseparable.
So when you’re shaping your next idea, don’t think of plot and character as separate checkboxes on your story to-do list. Treat them as partners. Ask yourself: how does this plot specifically challenge my protagonist? Until next time, Naomi 🎉 And for this week's bonus prize...I've been (mostly secretly) experimenting with turning these weekly screenwriting articles into audio versions. Many people have asked, and I've always wanted to make them available, but didn't have a good way to do so until now. 📣 Introducing... Robots Talk About Screenwriting 🤖(I thought this would be more entertaining than me reading at you. But you let me know what you think of the result.) This podcast is simply meant to be a fun, low-key way to share some of the hundreds of screenwriting articles I've written in a new format. Each episode features synthetic voices (the robots!) discussing one of my screenwriting articles. It's an easy way to learn while walking the dog, driving to work, or procrastinating on your rewrite. I feed the robots only articles I've personally written, and I include any clarifying comments I feel are needed in the episode description. Get it on YouTube, Spotify, Apple Podcasts, and more. (And leave a comment or send me an email to let me know if I should make more episodes!) |
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